Animation Take 2

Hey guys , So I'm sorry that my other animation was rushed , it was my first time using that app and it was sort of hard because we had a set time , But I decided to make one while I was at home and While I was calling my friends :) 

 

• Things I could work on next is .. Taking more time and adding more detail , But it is my first time so It's explainable of why my standards are so low .   
• Things I liked was ... Being able to create a sensible animation and having it sort of come to life :) 

Piskel Animation ( Edited Version )

 A Couple weeks ago Me and my Manawanui class Made piskel animations , keep in mind that this was our first time using Piskel so Mine Didn't turn out that Great . Some things That I could work on are Using more detail and Colour , and also Using more Descriptive language in My description and Title ( This is my edited version so this is the after )    

Before ( Unedited Version ) 

After ( Edited Version )